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Cambridge IELTS Book 17 Writing Task 2 Test 3

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is increasingly common for many young people to spend a significant portion of their day using mobile devices. This essay explores the reasons behind this trend and why I believe it leads to negative health consequences.

There are several factors contributing to the heavy use of smartphones among children. The primary reason is the growing reliance on virtual activities in modern education. Students are often required to research and submit assignments online, and smartphones offer convenience and accessibility for these tasks. This became even more pronounced during the recent pandemic when most learning shifted to online platforms, and students used mobile apps for teamwork and assignments. Additionally, social media has become the primary mode of communication for many youths. Without regular smartphone access to stay connected with their peers, children may face social isolation.

In my opinion, the drawbacks of extended smartphone use in young people outweigh the benefits, particularly regarding their health. The physical harms of excessive screen time are twofold. Firstly, prolonged exposure to blue light can damage eyesight, with children’s developing eyes being especially susceptible. Secondly, extensive smartphone use often leads to a sedentary lifestyle, as it replaces physical activity. On the emotional side, without proper monitoring, children can be exposed to inappropriate content, such as violent or sexual imagery, and may also become victims of online bullying. For example, many countries have reported rising rates of mental illness among preteens, who are ill-prepared to cope with the constant harassment they face, not just from peers but also from malicious adults.

In conclusion, the increasing use of smartphones among children is largely driven by educational demands and changing social interactions. However, I believe this trend poses significant risks to both the physical and emotional development of young people. (305 words)